are these lyrics good??

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are these lyrics good??
Topic Started: Jan 3 2008, 10:54 PM (565 Views)
microcreations	Jan 3 2008, 10:54 PM Post #1
Member Posts: 68 Group: Members Member #1,065 Joined: August 14, 2007	hey, are these lyrics good?? ive posted them before, but no one told me if it was good. Bombs blowin off In our ears Been goin on for the past several years We’re through with it now We’re gonna stop this some how Cause... We don’t want you here anymore Making our lives total war This is something we won’t forget You just don’t get it You’re causing devastation In our so called “ nation” Now we’re all walkin away There’s gonna be no one here someday We’re through with it now We’re through with you now (echo)



mynameisDavid	Jan 4 2008, 09:32 PM Post #2
Member Posts: 1,102 Group: Moderator Member #294 Joined: March 2, 2007	yeah those are good remind me of RATM and stone sour a little bit
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coheedandcambria1993	Jan 16 2008, 09:16 PM Post #3
Member Posts: 29 Group: Members Member #3,015 Joined: December 14, 2007	those lyrics are really good. wish i could write like that.



microcreations	Jan 26 2008, 11:56 PM Post #4
Member Posts: 68 Group: Members Member #1,065 Joined: August 14, 2007	thanks guys. doesn't anyone else have any coments on this song



Bullet	Jan 27 2008, 01:27 PM Post #5
Admin Posts: 1,912 Group: Admin Member #183 Joined: January 13, 2007	Nope, when it is a SONG, I will comment. It's very hard to comment on lyrics when they aren't in their context. These could be crap lyrics or awesome lyrics depending on how you use them. We are all waiting..... :lol:



+ tylerstrat89	Apr 18 2008, 01:36 AM Post #6
tylerstrat89 Posts: 84 Group: Retired Member #4,876 Joined: March 7, 2008	mmm........reminds me of world war II



henrynirvana	Jul 27 2008, 09:29 PM Post #7
Newbie Posts: 11 Group: Members Member #8,687 Joined: July 26, 2008	i like them but the chorus if it is the chorus the bit that starts "we dont want you" and ends at "you just dont get it" neededs a bit of work but all in all they are good


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