A Mellow Song

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A Mellow Song
Topic Started: Jan 19 2007, 10:00 PM (548 Views)
CarvinGuy	Jan 19 2007, 10:00 PM Post #1
Member Posts: 27 Group: Members Member #159 Joined: December 29, 2006	Here is Mellow tune I came up with. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. http://www.purevolume.com/hillbillyjuice
	THAT WHICH DOES NOT KILL US, ONLY MAKES US STRONGER!


Bullet	Jan 20 2007, 11:30 AM Post #2
Admin Posts: 1,912 Group: Admin Member #183 Joined: January 13, 2007	Very good, not my type of music, but it is still good



Mini Slash	Jan 22 2007, 01:21 AM Post #3
Member Posts: 51 Group: Members Member #157 Joined: December 23, 2006	I really liked it...IMO I think it could do with a second guitar playing rhythm (I'm sorry if there already is but I couldn't hear one), but mostly what I noticed was a lack of Dynamic variation which is quite important for something like that...Although overall really nice...



CarvinGuy	Jan 27 2007, 02:16 AM Post #4
Member Posts: 27 Group: Members Member #159 Joined: December 29, 2006	Thanks for the advice. Once someone explained to me what Dynamic variation was I could see your point. That is something i really haven't paid any atention to but will from now on. Just a note I did put a rhythm track behind but it is hard to hear. My next purchase will be a good mic. Thanks again.
	THAT WHICH DOES NOT KILL US, ONLY MAKES US STRONGER!


A_Brady	Jul 1 2008, 06:20 PM Post #5
Newbie Posts: 4 Group: Members Member #8,630 Joined: June 24, 2008	Not really my style either but nice melodies keep it up, how long you been playing?



yornod	Sep 18 2008, 05:59 PM Post #6
Still Jammin Posts: 15 Group: Members Member #8,838 Joined: September 17, 2008	very mellow i liked it very orginal keep up good work
	Fools Moon Recording


monwobobbo	Sep 19 2008, 12:40 PM Post #7
Posts: 1,032 Group: Moderator Member #8,625 Joined: June 23, 2008	thought it was good. kind of wished it had stayed acoustic but the electric part was well played. thought that the rhythm part was to bass heavy for what you played over it maybe use different chord voicings.
	and now for something completely different


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